Friday, December 26, 2008

Ice - poem

trapped inside ice I am, my body give up fighting long time ago, a blur image of a person appears in front of me, a sudden warm feeling in my heart from happiness, the blurry person seemed to be concerned of my condition, as the warm feelings grow, the ice suddenly melts, as the image becomes less blurry, I seen an angel behind the ice, my eyes pouring with warm tears, that I finally fond the one noticed me trapped in this ice.

edit:
no electricity so went out for coffee cafe at Avenous, returned and now staying with friends.



4 comments:

..:: P.ANONYMOUS ::.. said...

Oh my ... That was very well written and very warming !!

I loved it !! so simple yet so touching (^_^)

hope u enjoyed ur time out : D

Take care : )

Neoark said...

i did enjoy my time! I wasn't alone ;)

glad to see you like it, see i could write non-sad poem :p

sogeking777 said...

sheft ely galatly "ye5rab beetah!!" lol

Neoark said...

lol!!! no comment

glad you like the clothes i picked for ya, great test huh? ;)