Sunday, January 4, 2009

In My Arms - poem

In my arms I want you there.. To hold you To feel you.. To know that you are near to me.. To be loved, to be cared only by you.. My mind play tricks on me.. So confused I don't understand.. Was the trick that your not there.. Or was the trick that you are there..

Remember our first kiss under the tree.. Holding each other hands crossing our fingers together.. Starring at me with those intriguing eyes.. A picture fells from a dusty shelve.. Suddenly Tears starts pouring.. I come to the realization.. That I was the one who was gone.. In the end I'm just a memory from your past.

I don't think this poem any good, need remake :/


..:: P.ANONYMOUS ::.. said...

well to me what matters the most that what i read touches my heart ..
and this one certainly did XD

Neoark said...

you just been nice, i can make it better :/

..:: P.ANONYMOUS ::.. said...

sure u can make it better .. ;)

personally i like the rhymed poems very much !

Neoark said...

ok I'll keep it, in second thought seemed not bad, however only not bad :p

Think-Become said...

its a poem wanna be :P, with a little of makeup i think it will actually be great..

bas taby the truth, the meaning of it is enough.. it gets to you no matter what.

Neoark said...

thanks, but i can't make it better grammar >.>